2 April 2013

task softskill week 4


Nama        :     Desy mulanda sari
Kelas         :     3eb03
NPM         :     21210866
Matakul     :     Bahasa Inggrs Bisnis 2#

4.   Should goverment spend more money on improving road and highways or should goverment spend more money in improving public transportation ( buses, trans, subway ) why ? use spesific reason and details to develup your essay .
Answer :   
According to my repair damaged roads are not too severe or severe needs attention but also should pay attention to public transportation such sebuat subway, tram, bus way, sidewalk, penyerbangan tool for defectors, mono rail trains planes etc.

Due to an increase in public transport such as bus and subway trans will speed us to go to work, school or any other place we and reduce the accident rate in driving a growing number of private motor cars create congestion and potholes are endangering motorists

because an adequate number of facilities such as leisure facilities to make us comfortable, then everyone would prefer to use a personal vehicle transport is reduced and reduced accident rates

So my advice is better government chooses weeks to improve public transport rather than on improving the highway just to spend the money or the state budget.

1 komentar:

fancymom mengatakan...

it is not understandable and cohesion. It has many grammar errors as well.

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